Goodness me! Last Friday , my cat Jacob got stuck on a cat door so my Dad rang the SPCA because he thought that my cat was hurt.
When they arrived they pulled him gently. He was hard to pull out because he was so fat, so dad and I helped. Finally he was free!! I felt happy but when I saw that he was bleeding I was a little bit worried.
The SPCA people bandaged his cut. When they were done treating him, it was time to say goodbye. We thanked them for their help and waved goodbye.
Finally I gave my cat some milk and fish. He ate his food hungrily. I love my cat even though he is silly sometimes.
L.I. WALT.. write a recount about my pet in trouble.
Kumusta Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you have used adverbs in your story. I also like it when you added emotions to your characters. How did your cat get stuck in the cat door? I also like cats, even if they are silly sometimes!